Getting Attention

Getting attention is the first step to getting your customer to take action. 

But how to do it?

Some marketers think it’s by shouting. Some – particularly on the radio – think it’s by singing to their customers. Remember when Homer Simpson wanted to get everyone’s attention? By shooting a gun in the street? People running away in droves.

Sometimes the same happens with marketing attempts that hit you every day. How much of it actually makes you sit up and say “that’s for me”?

Getting your prospect to nod their head and say “that’s for me” is your objective here. And no one ever got that from me by singing to me, no matter how catchy the jingle.

In direct response marketing, you’ve got very little time to capture someone’s attention before they turn the page, or throw your insert or letter in the bin.

So the place to do it is in your headline. Your headline has to speak to the problem or issue or desire that the prospect has which you’re about to solve. Depending on the way you’re selling – for example an advert or a letter – determines how much room you have, but it’s generally easier to explain it in a long headline, rather than a short one.

“how to” headlines are always good. For example, the book title “How to win friends and influence people” wouldn’t have had half the impact if it had just been “Win friends and influence people”

“How to build a memory in 4 short weeks — so powerful it is beyond your wildest dreams today!” – is a Eugene Schwarz classic.

Questions are good too. If you’re a financial advisor, you might put a title on an ad saying “Why haven’t mortgage holders been told these seven deadly facts?”

Would that get your attention? Yes, if you have a mortgage. No, if you haven’t – and that’s fine, because you only want the people who have a problem you can solve – they’re your customers, not the tyre-kickers.

Headlines make up only a small part of whatever your advert or direct mail piece is, but testing has shown that it receives 4 to 5 times as much attention as anything else your produce, so it deserves 80% of the time you spend on your advertising to get it right.

And make sure you talk about the problem your customer is having, not how great you, or your product is. How much advertising do you see that is about the product, or about the company selling it? I’m going to say most of it. Your customer isn’t interested in you, only about themselves.

Write to them as if you were sat beside them having a chat. Don’t sing to them, or lecture them, or boast to them. Say only what you would say to them if they were sat talking to you face to face.

To get attention, words do most of the work, but other elements help too. If you’re advertising, put a picture of a man or a woman’s face in the advert – people are drawn to faces on a page first. Then they can read your headline. If the headline gets their interest, then they’ll read further. Put as much information in there as possible. And leave them clear as to how to respond to take advantage of your offer. Don’t be tempted to take the ‘arty’ approach and waste your money with lots of white space – just talk simply and directly to your customer about their problems and the way to solve them.

Dramatic? no. Award winning? almost certainly not.

But profitable?
test it out for yourself.

Denis

Have a customer list? Want to make more sales?

I haven’t been posting for a while due to a manic summer – (for all the right reasons thank god – how was yours?).

So I thought I would make updr for it by giving away some of my “recession? what recession?” insider secrets over the next few posts.

Let me ask you something:

Do you have a customer base that could buy more of your products or services… but aren’t?

Would an increase in sales of 5%, 10%, or 25% or more be a good answer to your maiden’s prayer?

If you answered ‘yes’ to one or both of those questions then stick with me here. Over the next few days – maybe weeks, I’m going to post my tactics, techniques, and procedures for getting more customers using my weapon of choice, direct marketing.

Well, it’s not so much a weapon, as a complete freaking arsenal.

If there’s one thing every business should be doing it’s this. If you are a small business and aren’t doing it, you’re missing out on a way to become a big business fast.

Why?

Because quite simply it is the only form of advertising you can use that shows you exactly how much money is brought in for the amount of money you spend – an exact return on investment – I’ll talk about that later – and show you how to do it too.

Want to join in with comments, or questions, or “Denis you suck, this is wrong and here’s why” – feel free my friend – what are blogs for, if nor for flaming

First up: just what is direct marketing?

Direct marketing is using any medium that puts you or your product in front of a customer in such a way as to get a response. In other words, you want those prospects to take action. Ideally, the action that you actually want them to take, and not walking out of your shop, throwing your letter in the bin, or seeing what’s on youtube instead.

A lot of people think that direct marketing is junk mail. Well, that’s one form of it, just like spam is a form of email, but not all email is spam.

And a lot of other people think direct marketing is letters, leaflets, inserts. They can be forms of direct marketing, but it’s not limited to that.

Yet others say “bollocks to your direct marketing Thornton, we’re sticking with the internet”, and they’d be confused too, because what is selling on the net, if not direct marketing? – unless we’re talking about social media (more on which in a later instalment).

My friend and mentor Drayton Bird – get his excellent 51 tips here – calls marketing via the internet “Accelerated direct marketing” – a definition I don’t think can be beaten, and you’ll hear me use it quite a lot.

Why “accelerated”?

The essence of direct marketing is that you can figure out what works and what doesn’t through testing small, before you blow big bucks on a wider campaign.

Using the net, you can test fast too, sometimes getting results within a few minutes of putting something up on the web. Google ads and facebook ads are good examples of this because you can ‘split test’: Put up 2 ads first person gets shown Advert A, next person gets Advert B, next person gets Advert A, and so on. Over a few hundred of those you can figure out which one is winning, and which is a dog. Think that will save you/make you money over a month or so? You bet. Find a winner, sack the loser, try to beat the winner. Over time your ad that started out lame evolves into first something good, then something better.

You can do the same thing in newspapers but it takes a little more time. I still like newspapers though, because a lot of people read them – especially people who aren’t on the net that much. If your prospects and customers aren’t under 50, then you might have better pickings in the classifieds.

But so far, so what? How is a classified going to set the world alight?

Well, when you get them to take action of course!

Every ad or communication you do should not leave your office unless you have it going out with a specific aim in mind. Not ‘brand awareness’ or any of that crap – we’re here to make money remember? We don’t have the time or the money to waste on stuff like you see advertisers do all the time.

Advertising’s a bit like poker in this regard – watch what the big boys do and then copy it? Prepare to be burned.

So don’t look at coke, or Marks and Spencers, or any of that lot – they’re running to a whole different agenda. That’s marketing departments spending someone else’s money. You’re spending your money remember?

Figure out what action you want them to take first. Then write your ad (or letter, or email, whatever) around that single aim. Don’t give them a choice (confused customers will do nothing). Just lead them down a little path towards what you want them to do.
For example, you could put a classified ad in the paper that gets people to respond for a free sample or a free report. You get their name and address in return, and now you can market to them in a letter. You send them a letter inviting them to come in and see you for whatever it is you sell. You give them a reason to come too (and not just your product). Once they’re in, then you can sell them something, or give them a trial.

Here’s how it might work:

Let’s say I have an accountancy business. I love accountants because more than anyone else besides my wife, they keep me out of jail (well the good ones do).

But let’s say I want more customers.

I could put an ad in the newspaper – a small ad – and instead of saying “THORNTON ACCOUNTANTS” at the top and a big shot of me being a big shot – which is how most local ads go – I put “THORNTON ACCOUNTANTS” in small letters at the bottom because I know no one is interested in me. At All.

Because people are only interested in themselves.

So I put a headline up there that stops the reader in their tracks. How about, (and I’m doing this off the cuff here and you would need to have stats you could back up)….

“Have you missed out on claiming back €1,547 in wrongful tax this year?”

and then went on to say:

“Did you know that in the last year alone, over 1 in every 7 PAYE workers were overcharged an average of €1,547 in tax wrongfully taken from them by the Revenue?”

It’s easy to find out if you’re one of the thousands of irish workers who have been ripped off. And it’s easy to get it back.

To find out if you’re owed this money call us now on 01 234 5678, for your FREE assessment.

Now this would have a lot of PAYE-rs beating a path to your door. It’s Direct response. But it doesn’t actually sell anything. That comes later when you’re face to face with them. Or via a letter, depending on what you want to do.

Those that do come in and need money back, get it, and you get a commission. Those that don’t get money back, you can now start to market to directly via the beauty of letter writing, about all the things that accountants can do…

…but in a way that interests your new found list of prospects. Prospects who have raised their hands and said, “I am interested in what you have to say”

….Next up: how to get their ATTENTION!

D

Dig The Well Before You Thirst

I was in Norway during the week, a terrific (and solvent) country that I like more every time I go.  When I was there, I got a few New Years’ resolutions down in my journal.

You might think I’m odd, but a habit I’ve developed over the last few years is to choose and start my New Years’ resolutions 2 weeks early, in December.

There are 2 reasons why I do this. I wonder if you agree?  The first is that I get a head start, and a head start in anything usually makes you feel good.

The second reason — and by far the most important one — is that it’s easier to think about them before Christmas.  It’s in the cold light of New Year’s day that many make promises to themselves that they either can’t keep or know that they won’t bother.   I’m going to cut down on booze, or food, or I’m going to exercise more, or this year I’ll start that business.

More often than not these promises come from a feeling of guilt.  Sometimes the come from a position of hope.  Either way, they’re not coming from where I believe they should be: Reality, salted with an unshakeable resolve.

You see, guilt fades.  And promises made against it fade too.  It’s all too easy to rationalise away the reasons why we started in the first place.  And the gym membership becomes a waste of money.  The plans to get going in business never seem to get off the ground.

Reality never fades.  And when you couple your resolve to reality, things will start to happen for you.  And reality is going to bite for many people across the world this year.  One of the things I learned as a soldier is to

“Hope for the best – Prepare for the worst”

And I do hope for the best.  I also plan for the best.  I plan my goals.  Needle away at them all year.  This keeps them front and centre of the mind, where they sit – ready to grab opportunity whenever it comes.  And they come a lot more often to the prepared mind than they do to the merely hoping.  Hope isn’t enough by itself – but I like to hope, because it keeps the sunny disposition going.

But you must plan.  And you must set clear goals if you are to succeed.  And I can help you do that if you like.  I’m writing a short goal-setting report.  It’s just a couple of pages, but you can have it for free if you want it.  To get it, just drop a comment below or email me.  Tell me what you want to achieve in 2011, and I’ll send it to you as soon as I’ve finished it.  All I ask in return is that you hit the Facebook share button on the share bar.

One of your goals should get as many lines of income as you can, as soon as you can, so that redundancy or paycuts don’t destroy your life.  Fully 80% of people, and maybe more, are only 2 pay-packets away from serious debt, foreclosure, or bankruptcy.  If this sounds like you, then now is the time to give serious thought to how you could do this.  Even writing down the question in a journal or diary will start the thinking process.

In the meantime, have a great Christmas, and here’s to your success in 2011.

The 3 Stars of How I learned to be a CopyWriter

Many friends and clients have asked me how I became a copywriter, given that my background is tech, communication systems, Government tenders, and flying helicopters.

Some even suggested that I had no business starting a marketing career “so late”  - and to hell with them (I’m 39 – my Dad says I’m still a kid – you decide).

I spent a good part of the last 10 years writing ‘white papers’ for a UK Government Agency.  They’re an internal document circulated around departments to inform, persuade, and get action, so their relationship to selling isn’t too hard to see.

The tricky thing with white papers is that emotive language is verboten, so Mr Spock-style reportage is the style of choice. Lead the reader down a path of logic and offer them a choice, or a recommended course of action.

So that was a good primer for a copywriting career.  But there were 3 other elements, 3 other stars that – when they came into alignment – set off a course of events that would change things for me.

The first star was more of a black hole: a burning desire to find a way to sell specialist products on the web.  I knew about copywriting –  or “salesmanship in print” – of course.  I also found out the hard way I wasn’t that good at it.

It’s easy to look at a sales page on the web and think “hey I could do that”.  It wasn’t too long before I saw I needed help.

And that’s when the other 2 stars came into line …

One of my favourite truths is that “when the pupil is ready, the teacher will appear”.  And it’s testament to the power of email referrals that I was reading (skimming actually) an email from a newsletter I get (I think it might have been Early to Rise).

I’d closed the email and moved on to the next when something registered back in my lizard brain.

I re-opened the last email and there it was: something about a copywriting course.  Knowing I needed help, I clicked on the link which brought me to hear about a copywriter called John Carlton for the first time.  I didn’t know it then, but John is one of the world’s very best copywriters (and a bit of a late starter himself according to his own account).  The link brought me to the page for John’s Simple Writing System course.

And it sounded good – just what I needed.  But like all prospects, I wasn’t quite sold on it yet.  I was sitting on the fence. But in one of those “knock ‘em off the fence” moves that John likes to talk about, I saw a testimonial from a person I have met, respect and trust enormously:  Dan Kennedy, multiple great book author and the editor of the best print newsletter I believe you can get.  Here’s what Dan said:

John Carlton is a copywriter I would hire, and there are damn few of those. Further, I would pay to be in a room to learn from him, and there are even fewer people on that list.” Dan Kennedy “The No B.S. Marketing Newsletter”

Now, given that Dan charges something like $18,000 a day for consulting, that’s high praise indeed.  So I bought the program.

Before I tell you what the final and most significant star was to getting my copywriter wings, check out what you get in the package.

The final – and vital – star that came into line was the teacher I had on the SWS course.

This is a guy who looked at the best that I had – then – and held it up the light in front of my eyes so I could see the holes it was riddled with …

…He put me through one of the 17 stages of the course – some would say the hardest stage – nine times before I began to hit the mark …
… He coached, cajoled, scolded, and led-by-bloody-example through two months that literally changed the trajectory of my life …

… His name is David Deutsch.  A finer teacher I never knew.

And here’s some good news if you want to learn from this teacher.  Incredible as it seems, up until now he hasn’t had a blog that I could tell you about.

He does now.  And he’s giving away his “Copywriting From A to Z” which is one of my most prized possessions (David’s Blog).

And that’s the story of how I got started in copywriting.  Since then, my investment in the SWS course has paid off far, far more than it cost – in either time or money.

And the 3 stars that got me started keep me writing copy tonight.

Why a Good Offer with Bad Copy Beats a Bad Offer With Good Copy

Drayton Bird likes to say this a lot, and it’s one of those things that makes sense, of course, but it’s only when you really are presented with “an offer that only an idiot would refuse” that it really hits home.

2 weeks ago, I was caught by a speed camera doing 40 in a 30 zone.  I got the letter a few days later asking me to confirm I was indeed the driver on that day.  What bothered me was not the £60 fine, but the 3 points on my licence.  It’s the fact that I already have 3, so I’d be half-way to an automatic ban and a serious crimp on my working life.  As it was, I’d have a car insurance premium increase, so it was all a bit irritating.

My fault, but irritating all the same.

Then today I got a letter from the AA cheerily telling me that they had been told by the Police that I was a bad ‘un and that the offence ‘could’ carry a £1000 fine and 3 penalty points, even though the £60 was much more likely.  Only the boys in yellow didn’t mention that.

As an alternative, they suggested, I could sign up for a ‘speed awareness course’ costing only 85 quid, and if I attended (provided I didn’t wear any football tops, arrive late, or become abusive according to the T’s & C’s), they’d forget about the points.

Now the copy was bad, they stated a deadline – but didn’t say what would happen if I failed to meet it (go to court probably), the only benefit – that I wouldn’t get the points — was buried in the copy instead of in the pisspoor headline — “ALTERNATIVE OFFER & INVITE LETTER” — and they did use a P.S. but just said don’t forget to book before 14 December.

It was as if they got a template of a direct response letter, but didn’t understand what they were supposed to do with it.  If the letter was done by the same people that write their mail to get business, then I’d buy shares in RAC if I were you, because the AA ain’t going to be around for much longer.

But not a jot of it mattered (except that I nearly threw it away as junk mail) because the offer was perfect.  They identified someone with a problem and charged them money to solve it.  Yes, they had a lot in their favour – - like the police supplying them with a list – - but now the AA have my name, address and email with which to sell me more stuff.  All in all, not a bad deal for them.

And a forcibly applied set of New Year’s resolutions on the 5th of January for me.

Action Marketing

Information marketing has been around for a long time although, to listen to some, you’d think it only arrived with the internet.  Most people have an almost inexhaustible demand for information: on their hobbies, their health, their business, their favourite celebrities, even each other.  Maybe even especially each other.  That’s pretty much what Facebook amounts to after all.  Chit-chat. Idle Banter. A bit of fun.  Gossip.  All finally bound into a terrific money-making system.

But information marketing goes way back.  Direct response adverts and mail littered the Reader’s Digests and the Sunday Times Magazines of the last century.  And I’ve even noticed a bit of an upturn in direct response in the last year or so.  Businesses finally demanding a return on their advertising dollars perhaps?  I think so.

It’s possible to get swamped by information of course.  And it’s typical for people to download more free info, buy more books and sign up to more videos long before they’ve ever got through the stuff they’ve already got.  My favourite theory for this is it’s the brain mistaking activity for progress.  ”I need info on this, so I download that, and the edge of my need is taken off” type of thing.

Heck, I even give away information when you sign up for my newsletter which is, in itself, free information.  But information by itself isn’t enough.  The information only represents potential power.  To turn it into money, or good health, or a better relationship requires implementation.  It requires Action.  A harder sell altogether.

So how best to get the action habit?  Well I think the first thing to remember is that it is actually a habit in the first place.  Just like inaction is a habit.  Jim Rohn said it best when he said that doing it was easy, it was just that not doing it was easier.  So try and do something every day, preferably at the same time.  Get up a little earlier and slot it in then.  Channel some of your Facebook time into productive time.  Set a deadline. And clear away distractions like email, and interruptions like phonecalls.  You’d be surprised what you can get done when you put your mind to it.

Robert Ringer wrote a great book on it called “Action. Nothing happens until something moves” where he discusses the magic of action and by actually taking some, your motivation will follow.  What’s interesting when you read this book is that you realise that someone as accomplished as Robert suffers from what pretty much everyone I know suffers from — including me — which is the inertia that needs to be overcome to get anything done.  You begin to realise that most successful people are successful not because they know more, or are more intelligent, but mainly because they simply get more done.

And that’s why ‘done for you’ products are so popular.  Web pages that you only have to add your words and product to.  Products that you can resell.  Affiliate programmes. Drop shippers.  But even these only bring you so far.  You still have to get out of bed, turn on the computer, and do something.  So these products can and do make your path to bucks in the bank shorter, but you still have to get going.

And as it takes as much effort to get going for one thing as much as it does another, why not work on that?  Why not make that one aspect of your life the focus of your attention, to actually be focussed for an hour every day?  And then 2 hours and then three until the habit becomes ingrained.

And let’s face it, if anyone could come up with a fool-proof product that could get you that way, right now, they’d have a killer product right there.

If anyone could be bothered to read it that is …

How To Save £5000 of Your Advertising Budget

The rule number one of anything in business, according to Dan Kennedy, is to “look at what your competitors are doing and do the opposite”.  This is probably the best advice I have ever received, next to “don’t buy a house in Ireland” in 2007.

That advice, interestingly, came from MoneyWeek magazine, edited by the simply lovely Merryn Somerset-Webb, probably the smartest woman ever to be invited onto a breakfast show couch to brief a completely clueless presenter about some crisis or other (I can’t remember which one I saw her on).

Back in 2007, I had put a refundable deposit down on a house in Ireland where I was going to work as a pilot for a time.  When I got back to Scotland a friend was incredulous when I told him what I had done.

He put an email from MoneyWeek.com in my hands saying that Ireland was heading for a crash and within an hour I had withdrawn my deposit to the squeals of protest from the estate agent.  I’ve been renting ever since.

And I’ve been reading the magazine and emails ever since too.


But how can you save £5000 from your Advertising Budget by doing the opposite of what others do?  Well for that, let me introduce you to one of the UK’s Investment Firms, Baillie Gifford.  If you haven’t heard of them, then don’t worry, because neither had I until I opened MoneyWeek this morning.  Here’s the ad:

Headline: BIG ON THE WORLD

Deck Copy (the bit just below the headline): “We turn left into the world, go straight towards the best investments we can see and then sharp right in the direction of potential growth.”

Picture: A picture of a lot of signposts.

Body Copy: Actually a small amount of words (61 in total) of meaningless drivel.  But here’s something: “We” or “Our” is used 8 times. 8 times! out of 61 words! And “You”, meaning you the customer they hope to attract, is used, wait for it, once. And only to ask (if anyone bothered to read that far), “Are you going our way”?

Action Asked For: Call a number, visit the website.  No incentive to do either.

…and of course, lots of white space, costing money and contributing nothing.  They’re selling a mortgage investment trust, but you could be forgiven for thinking they were a student gap-year holiday firm.

Now, according to MoneyWeek’s advertising rates, a full page ad like this costs £5000.  Not bad, when a full page in a newspaper can cost the wrong side of thirteen grand.

But how will they know that the advert paid for itself?

The short answer is, of course, that they don’t.  They can’t.  Because they have no mechanism to track the response.  Just as well, as I bet the response is dismal.

So don’t make this mistake – or any of these mistakes – in your own advertising.

Many entrepreneurs look at what everyone else in their field is doing, if they are advertising in the yellow pages, or the newspaper, or specialist magazines like Money Week, and do exactly the same.  And a good few look at what big advertisers (with deep pockets) are doing and do that, on the assumption that it must be making them money.  That isn’t the case.

So with this advert we could look at it and do the complete opposite.  We could have a headline that attracts attention and actually means something.  We could explain to the reader what exactly a mortgage investment trust is (I haven’t a clue, and like all prospects, I can’t be bothered to find out).  We could change the body copy focus from how great Baillie Gifford is to how much the reader will benefit from reading on and giving them a damn good reason to drop everything and call the number at the end.

And we could give them an additional incentive to call, a free report with more information, for example.

So if you’re dependent on advertising — and most of us are, in one shape or form — have a look today at what your competitors are doing, and try and put yourself in the place of your target market.  Some of your competitors might be doing something right, most will not be.

Two good books I can recommend.  If you’re writing an advertisement, download the free book from this blog using the form to the right.  If you advertise using direct mail, then you cannot be without “How To Write Sales Letters That Sell” by Drayton Bird.  He also does a great series of free marketing tips if you request them on his site.

Why Nailing Down Your Business Model Is Crucial

This is a great slideshow that will walk you through the essential steps in figuring out a business model for your company. Courtesy of steve blank.




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Still Taking The Lessons: Market Share is not enough

I saw an ‘advertising feature’ in a local newspaper today – they’re pretty common around here for marketing and local businesses use them a lot.

The concept is that the newspaper does a ‘news item’ about the value of a particular service, and businesses that provide that service get to advertise (for no doubt inflated rates) around the so-called article.

It’s not a bad concept, because long copy always out-sells short copy, but it’s fatally flawed by a completely ineffective article and rubbish adverts from the businesses involved.

Here’s what I mean: the article was about how it’s important to learn to drive, which isn’t really news, and 4 adverts from driving schools all exactly the same, in exactly the same format:

  • Name of Driving School (extra large letters)
  • Town of operation
  • Telephone number

… and that’s about it.  The guts of 400 quid each down the drain.  And for what?  A lukewarm article that basically says “Advertising Feature: Night Follows Day. No Need To Read Further”.  Anyone who might be in the market for driving lessons might – might – then look at the ads, but there is nothing there to differentiate one from the other.  4 ads, so they’ll probably get 25% each of whatever paltry calls come in and then declare that advertising ‘doesn’t work’

Which is true… THIS sort of advertising doesn’t work!

First, because the advertising feature had a headline that promised no benefit. Remember that advert or article, the headline is the most important part.  If it had said “learn how to drive by Christmas”, or “Keep your Teenager Safe on the road with proper lessons”….   anything to attract someone, but no.  Just some half-baked attempt at summarising what was in the article, rather than giving a Big Promise.  Big difference.

Next, the ads themselves.  I don’t know why it is, (I suspect a total lack of imagination) but most adverts seem to love sticking people’s names, or their business names, up in lights.  Complete waste of money.  All the ads did this, but if one ad had said at the top : “Pass your driver’s test first time or get 3 additional lessons FREE” (Guarantee led, promise of good instruction, money where mouth is),

or “Driving lessons for you and a friend for 20% off” (value for money led)

or “Free Highway Code DVD and Driving Test ‘Cheat Sheet’ with every Lesson Bought by Friday” (information led with a ‘get action now’ deadline)

–and so on.

But nothing.  Just someone’s name at the top.  Big deal, people will just take pot luck, assuming they ever read that far, which most won’t.

Can you see the difference?  Always promise a benefit of some kind, and some reason to take action now.  That’s the way to get the phone ringing.  You don’t want market share, you want market domination. Because when the market goes down, as all to many are doing these days, you want to be able to have as much of what there is as possible.  Otherwise you all go out of business, all at roughly the same time.

Proper offers to attract customers to you is part of what it takes to lead and survive, rather than share and wither away.

Success? It’s about the journey.

Got this great insight from Kevin Spacey on achievement.  Never be afraid to fail. In whatever you do.

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