Getting attention is the first step to getting your customer to take action. 
But how to do it?
Some marketers think it’s by shouting. Some – particularly on the radio – think it’s by singing to their customers. Remember when Homer Simpson wanted to get everyone’s attention? By shooting a gun in the street? People running away in droves.
Sometimes the same happens with marketing attempts that hit you every day. How much of it actually makes you sit up and say “that’s for me”?
Getting your prospect to nod their head and say “that’s for me” is your objective here. And no one ever got that from me by singing to me, no matter how catchy the jingle.
In direct response marketing, you’ve got very little time to capture someone’s attention before they turn the page, or throw your insert or letter in the bin.
So the place to do it is in your headline. Your headline has to speak to the problem or issue or desire that the prospect has which you’re about to solve. Depending on the way you’re selling – for example an advert or a letter – determines how much room you have, but it’s generally easier to explain it in a long headline, rather than a short one.
“how to” headlines are always good. For example, the book title “How to win friends and influence people” wouldn’t have had half the impact if it had just been “Win friends and influence people”
“How to build a memory in 4 short weeks — so powerful it is beyond your wildest dreams today!” – is a Eugene Schwarz classic.
Questions are good too. If you’re a financial advisor, you might put a title on an ad saying “Why haven’t mortgage holders been told these seven deadly facts?”
Would that get your attention? Yes, if you have a mortgage. No, if you haven’t – and that’s fine, because you only want the people who have a problem you can solve – they’re your customers, not the tyre-kickers.
Headlines make up only a small part of whatever your advert or direct mail piece is, but testing has shown that it receives 4 to 5 times as much attention as anything else your produce, so it deserves 80% of the time you spend on your advertising to get it right.
And make sure you talk about the problem your customer is having, not how great you, or your product is. How much advertising do you see that is about the product, or about the company selling it? I’m going to say most of it. Your customer isn’t interested in you, only about themselves.
Write to them as if you were sat beside them having a chat. Don’t sing to them, or lecture them, or boast to them. Say only what you would say to them if they were sat talking to you face to face.
To get attention, words do most of the work, but other elements help too. If you’re advertising, put a picture of a man or a woman’s face in the advert – people are drawn to faces on a page first. Then they can read your headline. If the headline gets their interest, then they’ll read further. Put as much information in there as possible. And leave them clear as to how to respond to take advantage of your offer. Don’t be tempted to take the ‘arty’ approach and waste your money with lots of white space – just talk simply and directly to your customer about their problems and the way to solve them.
Dramatic? no. Award winning? almost certainly not.
But profitable?
test it out for yourself.
Denis








